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My True Love
by Jessica M. (Age: 16)
copyright 03-14-2005
Contest Winner

Age Rating: 4 to 127

 
I have one true love,
yes only one.
He is so wonderful,
this has to be love.

He is so magical.
His hugs so tight,
with feelings so dark,
and kisses so light.

Sometimes I wonder,
about people with none.
How can they live,
with no one to love?


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11-03-2005 Lauren T.    

I see depressing stuff too but this is so beautiful, I love romance and stuff like that.
06-01-2005 Shannon W.    

wow! it's short but so meaningful. i have a guy i love to his name is sean he is 14 and i'm 13. he is so amazing i dont know what i'd do with out him. i love love. it's so romantic. when your in love you will do crazy things for the one you love.
05-23-2005 Kristy Ahn    

Very sweet is all I really can say. This is what I call a poem simple but effective
05-07-2005 David Pekrul    

This is so wonderful and upbeat. It gives me a warm, fuzzy feeling. I like poetry like that; there are already too many people writing poetry about dark feelings and depression. I'm glad I have found your work; I'll be reading the whole lot.

Thanks,
David Pekrul
04-25-2005 Hank M.    

COOL! good
07-06-2004 Caitlin M.    

Well, hate to be rude but Hank only made this poem win because your his gf. It really doesn't explain why you think its truly love. And honestly, it is plain.
06-28-2004 Delaney Lindley    

I thought although it was very sweet, it seemed somewhat plain. Emotions like that about love are said all the time. You didn't hit very much on how important this grand love to you was, or how it made YOU feel. Do you feel like dancing, exploding everytime you see him? etc. So, I think it's good, it just needs more.
06-23-2004 Anne W.    

Sweet poem, Jessica!
Check your rhyme scheme to check for glitches
Ex.
A
B
C
D

Then the next stanza is:
E
F
G
F
You can change it or leave it how it is. Your choice.

~*anne*~
06-13-2004 Alixandria W.    

Great poetry Keep up the good work Jessica M.
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