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You'll Find A Way
by Chelsea Armstrong (Age: 22)
copyright 08-06-2004


Age Rating: 16 to 127

  You'll Find A Way
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Lost in a tunnel of pure darkness
Helpless to find a way out
Knowing not from where she came
Or which way to go
She wanders through the darkness, waiting
Figments of memories begin thier wrath upon the walls of the darkend mind
Vivid details of stories to come
Staring into the vast wide nothingness of Memory
She does not see the truth, until without looking
She crashes into it

Tiny rays of light escape the cracks of a dieing soul
Frantically, she begins to search for her way out
Endlessly scratching, clawing at the bonds of an enternally bound lock

Minutes turn to hours
Hours into days
Days into centries

Never losing hope
Never losing the sight of Faith
Finding the strength
The courage
To unlock the secrets of the world so securly hidden from the world
She throws her head back, and laughs in defiance
Thrusting the doors open
She stands in horror at herself

Face to face
Eye to eye
She finally faces the one thing that keeps her from living
Herself

So afraid of who she really is
A fear so uncontroled, she ignored it
And locked it away
Never wanting to be seen for who and what she really is
Too alone to understand it all

Only does she find peace
Confronting her greatest fear
She has won
She has truely won


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12-29-2004 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

I like this one too! You use such good words to describe your story. I am sure your other works will be just as good! Thanks, Anthony
07-13-2004 Christopher Doss    

Awesome, a very powerful piece. I did notice you need to change "dieing" to "dying". I like the pic too, it really goes with the poem.
07-11-2004 Jeniffer Brand    

Wow, that sounds just like me. I don't know what to say except that.
07-09-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Can't remember where I saw the photo before. Hmm.. BabesWithBlades.com? Yeah, I think that was is. Or one JUST like it. :-)

upon the walls of the darkend mind ... Don't know why exactly, but I would have written "A MIND" instead of "THE MIND". ??? Can't explain why though.

uncontroled should be uncontrolled. (I think the spelling errors slow down the reading some.) It has great potential though.





07-07-2004 Regina S.    

um, you have a few spelling errors in this one:
line 6- thier = their, and darkend = darkened.
2nd stanza, line 1- dieing = dying & line 3- enternally = eternally?
3rd stanza- centries = centuries
4rth stanza, 5th line- securly = securely
6th stanza- uncontroled = uncontrolled
& last line truely = truly.
Other than that, it was a pretty good and deep poem. I think it would have a better effect if you kill the word 'she'. you switch tenses like "she wanders..." and "staring into..." maybe it would be better if you change it to "wandering through..." and "not seeing the truth..." and stuff like that.
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