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Inflicted Chains
by Leah Garrison (Age: 20)
copyright 06-15-2004


Age Rating: 16 to 127

 
I close my eyes but I still see your face
I turn up the noise but I still hear your voice
I wrap myself up but I still feel your touch
Curse it all, beloved, I still miss you so much!

When you
Leave me
Remember to
Let go of me
Loose me, free me -
Because I keep holding on to you.

This candle stays aburning but there's no more wax
I try to shut you out but you keep creeping in the cracks
I gave you a decision and you chose to leave
So why in hell am I still so lonely?

When you
Leave me
Remember to
Let go of me
Loose me, free me -
Because I keep holding on to you.

Just go!
Get out of my head!
I though that I'd be free
But you left me chained instead!

When you
Leave me
Remember to
Let go of me
Loose me, free me -
Because I keep holding on to you.

Why do I keep holding on to you?


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07-09-2004 Jeniffer Brand    

Great!!! I like the way you write.
06-19-2004 Joan Jotz    

Leah,
Very clever form, I like the way this poem is laid out....has a very musical quality to it.
What a good song this would be!!
Your rhyme and rhythm scheme is good, it takes the reader on a journey of emotions, right up to the final question.

Joan
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