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Baby Classifieds....
by Jeniffer Brand (Age: 38)
copyright 07-14-2004


Age Rating: 1 to 127

 
I don't like peaches and I don't like pea's....
But I'm 6 months old and I aim to please!

I have a few, but very little hair....
The ones I have are red, and very rare!

My eyes are blue and my weight is slim....
Cause I work out daily on my Fisher Price gym!

When I grow up I'll put my foot to the throttle....
But as for now, I'm still sipping on the bottle!

I have my toys and I'm still learning to walk....
So give me a call for some baby talk?!

.......................................................
The name's Nate.....Nate Dawg....
and I'm lookin for a Baby Girl...to tawk!


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03-10-2005 Esther T.    

i like this poem but half of it doesent make sense splendid work esther t.
10-11-2004 Paula T.    

oh, that was so cute and funny!
I likes how you worked out on your fisher price gym.
Very cute, I loved it!
09-30-2004 Sammy A.    

Cute poem!!!!
07-15-2004 Victoria Medley    




07-15-2004 Jack Curson    

This is so funny, my little boy is out of the gym and running arond like crazy. Very good write.
07-11-2004 Walter Jones    

It is the wonder of what we see, that allows us to grow. No thought or desire is without merit as base for development. A child offers the perfect conversation, love. When two or more are present, it is called mishcief. Great poem and better insight. Walt
07-09-2004 Robert Betts    

very cute and a unique prspective
07-08-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

I love children. They are so funny and wise. Wise? Yes, wise! You learn the darndest things from kids!

As for the third couplet, it stopped me in my tracks cuz children (even young ones) DO have something to offer, and very much! The love, the happiness.... nothing compares to that. :-)

I'm also curious why it's rated for 16 years and older. I think it's age appropriate for ANY age. Just a thought. I know some little ones that would get a kick out of reading it. They can't see it if it's not within their age group, right? :-)

This has some great possibilities. With a little tweeking, it'll be great! Thank you for sharing.
07-08-2004 Victoria Medley    

Another witty little poem. In the third couplet 'greef' should be spelled 'grief', but I'm not sure if you did that on purpose. I agree with Regina, the third couplet doesn't seem particularly necessary, but it doesn't completely throw off the poem either.
07-07-2004 Regina S.    

Hehe, this is prety cute! :) well... kinda sick and twisted, but cute! Also, I think it might flow along better if you kill the third couplet? Just a suggestion.
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