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Upon a Time
by Delaney Lindley (Age: 18)
copyright 09-07-2005
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Upon a time, across the sea
Look into that star,
Tell me what you see
What is the magic
The path you've come to hate
the ways you've seen yourself
And the mistakes you make

Tell me another fairytale
Of Princesses of other lands
The dragons and knights that found them
The fate that rests in your hands

The story that made them real
The difference in the fight
The charactor's good and evil
Wrong always lost to right

Upon a time, across the sea
Look into that star
Tell me what you see

Guard the broken wings
The time that's already past
Lose yourself to love
And hope that it will last

Decide upon a way
Make your adventure grand
Make it keep fighting
To stay above the sand

Keep it in a memory
Locked in a secret star
Although almost out of reach
It was never that far

Upon a time, across the sea
Look into that star...
Tell me what you see.


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03-07-2007 Bunny Franz    

VERY nice. It flows well, and brings peaceful images to mind. I like the repeat of "Look into that star,
Tell me what you see."
12-17-2006 Mehrina B.    

A resounding poem! Mystic, with an ancient air around it that reminds me of Shakespeare for some reason. I really like the refrain, "Upon a time, across the sea; Look into that star; Tell me what you see". Grand write!
08-04-2006 Erin G.    

hi Delaney,

This poem is great. I love your rhymes, and how the poem flowed throughout its entirety. I also liked the fairytale stanzas. Very good job! :)

xoxo erin
06-25-2006 Tabitha Beaudin    

This poem is almost like a story in the way it's told. I really liked it. Good job. Tabby.
02-23-2006 Elizabeth Thornton    

Such a great poem! i could never think of something like that!! :) its a pretty poem
09-07-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Dreams do come true! This was a very nice poem. I loved it! Anthony
08-08-2004 Sam Hackel-Butt    

This is beautifully written. The words you've chosen are perfect for this poem, and really makes it sparkle. It really does show the "Once upon a time" musts, like the princess and dragons, for example.
06-29-2004 Toni Sweeney    

wow!!! This poem is awesome. I loved it so much. It has made my favorite poem list. Your rhyming and choice of words were awesome. I can not wait till I read your next poem.
Toni S.
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