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I Look At You
by Delaney Lindley (Age: 18)
copyright 12-15-2004

Age Rating: 13 to 127

I look at you
And feel like I've found a home
I feel your arms around me
And I finally know
Where I belong
I study your eyes
And see
My past, my present, my destiny
I see you and know
This is who I love
This is the person
That can steal my heart
And teach it to fly
Into and beyond
The limitless sky
Then seperate into conjoining parts
Sharing one ultimate future
One sealed fate
Near death in one sublime kiss
In harmonial lasting bliss
Forever lasting
Wrongless passion
I look at you and see
The part of me
I've been missing
For such a long time.

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04-01-2005 David Pekrul

Sometimes we just know the one that we are to spend our lives with; there's no question, no doubts, we just know.
This is a very good write. It flows well, is easy to read; very poetic.

David Pekrul

01-01-2005 Rebecca Pedigo

this makes me want to cry. i wish i had sumone to love like that. i wish i was loved like that. The poem is very great this is anothe poem that should be a contest winner. it should be published. u really express what true love is. I never though i'd see true love in words. i think this poem will help me through my hard times. -Rebecca

08-04-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball

Heh... I liked this. (It about wraps up in a poem what I said in my story GOOD THINGS TAKE TIME just recently posted in workshop - http://www.prose-n-poetry.com/display_work/1065/). This poem seemed to flow despite not having a definite meter and seemed to rhyme though no forced rhymes jumped out at me. :-)

Sometimes we meet that special someone, a soulmate that we were just meant to be with...if even for a little while. :-) I'd love to know what you thought of my story if you ever get a chance to go and read it. Comments and opions are always so helpful.

07-02-2004 Sam Hackel-Butt

Very beautiful piece. It was hard deciding the winner, but don't be descouraged! This was awsome, heart-felt, and terific.

-Sammy

06-29-2004 Toni Sweeney

what an awesome love poem. You show so much compassion. I love ethe poem. I enjoy lines 17 through the end the most. Keep up the good work.
Toni S.

06-29-2004 Cortney Jaruzel

This is such a beautiful poem!!!! Who ever you meant this poem to be for(if any), is a very lucky person to have you say and think this. I'd have nothing to complain for. Good job. =)

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I Look At You by Delaney Lindley (Age: 18) copyright 12-15-2004 Age Rating: 13 to 127

I Look At You
by Delaney Lindley (Age: 18)
copyright 12-15-2004

Age Rating: 13 to 127