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I Hit The Car!
by Caitlin M. (Age: 16)
copyright 05-02-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
This story was one of my most scary moments. To comfort I'll change the name. Please approve this I am writing this to feel better. Thank you.

Rachel was in first grade. She was very happy and always got good grades. Not a problem in sight, never anything wrong. One day Rachel was picking up her rocks in her front yard and lightly tossing them. About two or three inches away from her. And down rolled a bright red car. About brand new, inside driving was a guy and maybe his girlfriend. Out of no where inside she felt to hit the car. This sudden anger made her hit the car. The guy came out furious and said,"What the heck is wrong with you!" Crying, she opened the gate and ran in her backyard. The guy banged on her door as hard as he could. She ran to her father. Rachel was so scared she forgot everything at that moment. Her dad was sleeping, and she awakened him. Rachel said studdering,"Dad.....I.....threw a rock......at a car." He went crazy and shook her hard,"YOU WHAT!" As her dad went to answer the door she ran into the closet. The two teenagers and her dad had a chat. At that moment Rachel started crying and said,"I'm sorry." She is afraid of when a red car drives down the road. Constantly, Rachel thinks its them trying to come and get her. Guess nothing will settle her after that.


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07-26-2004 Paula T.    

That was really good. I loved it. I understand how you're feeling. I really like this story & think that you should try to write more stories like these. Base them on real happenings in your lifetime. It makes your writing come alive.
Keep writing. It will be out of the workshop in no time.


07-13-2004 Christopher Doss    

Well, hopefully you didn't repeat that mistake! I remember well doing things and acting out, and not really understanding why I did them at the time. We grow and learn.


06-29-2004 Toni Sweeney    

In the beging when I read the title I thought you hit a car with another car. I was reliefed when I found out that it was just a rock. but still you did hit the car because you were angry.
Toni S.


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