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Forever Be My Friend
by Mika L. (Age: 15)
copyright 08-08-2004


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
I wish you'll come back
the sadness I feel
All the good times we had
despite the bad
I'll cherish you forever
my forever friend



(This poem is dedicated to my best friend who left to Korea not too long ago)


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08-08-2004 Mika L.    

Jane. I miss u. I wish you'd come back right now. I wanna play with u again.
08-08-2004 Jeniffer Brand    

First of all, I knew if I sponsored you you would post your work!!!! Thank you! Second of all, I'm an army brat. I've been around and left some of my dearest friends in tears. And third of all, its a smallllllllll world. My best friend I had in 1985....we stumbled upon each other again in the same town we now live in!!!! And she even kept her pack (we had a pack) to name our kids after another. Her daughters name is Jennifer. I never had kids. Meeting people, saying goodbye, or hello, makes you for who you are and will be growing up. Don't cry. Just remember, you've had a chance to meet someone you loved. Now take that and share that with another and so on and so on. Its, in the end, a wonderful thing to be able to get to know someone and be in their life, if forever, a year, or a month. It's still special.
08-08-2004 Jane L.    

I feel the same.
08-08-2004 Jane L.    




07-07-2004 Sam Hackel-Butt    

Spelling:
cherrish = cherish

I feel like the first two verses are cramming into each other, and they don't run smoothly. Like Buddy said, punctuation is needed. But maybe re-word verse 2 so it doesn't just jump out and bite you ^.~

And i'm being silly, it won't bite you.
Fix the few small errors, and you should feature this!
07-04-2004 Buddy Ales    

Not a bad poem at all, Mika! Oughta run Charlie on it once or twice and if you fix some punctuational problems its perfect! The one thing I see most people doing now is forgetting poetry punctuation, one must remember that punctuation is used in poetry as well. Not bad though! Why not "Feature" it, it is just THAT good!
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