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You Hurt Me!
by Buddy Ales (Age: 18)
copyright 08-05-2004


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
You hurt me so,
so very much,
but I don't woe.

Do you know the touch,
the touch of sorrow?
I don't know why,
but there is tomorrow,
will still be wry.

I don't know why,
why ever you hurt me.
Was it because I,
was being myself?

You have no clue,
how you can hurt me.
You don't even know,
know who I am!

If you can't accept me,
then go and burn!
Just let me be!


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01-06-2005 Buddy Ales    

Wow, lotsa comments on this one. This is actually based on when me and my ex-gf broke up. Sometimes i still wish we were together but it wasnt exactly MY choice to break up. It was hers and for that I have no say. :-P Im bad-@$$ on the outside yet a big softie on the inside ;-)
12-16-2004 Sarah B.    

Thats a great poem.. Nice job.
09-11-2004 Alixandria W.    




09-04-2004 Riley M.    

great emotion, we all no how bad pain can be, but you really captured the essence..awesome job!!

-Riley
08-14-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Oops..forgot to give my points. :-)
08-03-2004 Paula T.    

Nice poem. Creative and interesting. I like the flow of the rhythym. It's really good. It will be out of the workshop really soon. It doesn't belong here. It belongs on the main page.
07-21-2004 Emily Garwood    

it's really good and a very interesting poem, i also like the fact it rhymes in some places despite being free verse makes it all the more interesting good write ^-^
07-09-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Although I felt a bit of anger in the "Go and Burn" part, I felt more a sense of being and self confidence in demanding to be who you truly are. :-) I like that!

I am not familiar with free verse and therefore can not comment on style. I like to comment instead on messages, themes, and feelings (real or imagined). Feeling felt? Pride and self acceptance.
07-09-2004 Jeniffer Brand    

I thought that was very nice. I can put myself right into that situation and feel it as I would have felt it.
07-07-2004 Victoria Medley    

Ooooooh, I love the repitition! Very good. You're right, it is free verse...since there's not much rhythm either (but I don't think there was meant to be). The message is good: You should always be yourself. ^_~
07-05-2004 Buddy Ales    

Please realize this is slightly rhymed in places but is truly meant to be free verse!
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