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If you read this, please read "Good-bye Jasmin". She didnt make it. I paid $200 for tests just to find nothing and to find that most feline cancers dont show up on blood tests and x-rays are very expensive as well. I'll forever miss my companion and regret not being able to do anything for her. I tried but with no results. She was skin and bones. I guess (I know) I did the right thing...letting her go.
My only suggestion (before I begin complimenting you) is this: "Stood by Mom, whichever house we where in," should probably be "WERE in." Also,
"I bought a condo, no going back to were we once where," should be "WHERE we once WERE." Lol, it doesn't matter, really, though. This is a beautiful poem, full of love, truth, and feelings close to all of us pet lovers. Great job, you portray love and emotion (especially for animals) very well.
There is a wonderful lightheartedness to this poem, given the sad event of your cat having to take medication. Made me think of a cat I use to have, Langston, but I had to give him away:( Hold on to you Jasmin Marie. BTW: you just need to fix a few grammatical errors in this, but nice!!!!
Aww this poem reminds me of my cat Osker. He keeps getting locked in places, and we don't seem him for weeks, and when he comes back, he's litterally skin and bone :( and we have to give him medications and stuff...
My son would love this poem. He cherishes his own cat, Lego. I think I'll show it to him later. In the mean time, some of the rhymes seem forced. Nice sentiments though. :-)
This is such a cute yet sad poem. In line 12 you typed 'where' instead of 'were', which is probably just a simple typo you overlooked. This is grammatically correct, has great rhythm, and the rhymes are so clever. Definitely one of my favorite poems on PNP and a great read. ^_~ Welcome back!
*sniff* this is soo sad! :( But still a very beautiful write! Just, if you want, kill the 11th couplet, it seems like it's kinda there to take up space. You repeat the same thing in the last sanza anyway, so the poem'll be perfect without it. :)
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