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The Greatness
by Mika L. (Age: 15)
copyright 09-06-2004


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
As I walk and wander
I seem to ponder
why am I here?
why am I as I am?

But I realize
it is of a gift...
a gift from...
the almighty sky


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05-11-2006 Shannon W.    

This is cute. Your expressing yourslf in ways most can't. Poetry.
08-01-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

I like that you're expressing yourself. That's good. I also agree with you in acknowledging that there is a higher power. Follow his guidance and you'll go much farther and with more success than if you do it on your own.

You once asked that people read your poems. I'm going to as I get the chance. The only thing I ask in return is to return the favor tho those who comment on your work. Go to theirs and see what they have to offer as well. We're a wonderful family here at PNP, and it's great when we all work as a team. :-)
07-12-2004 Victoria Medley    

I'm not quite sure if you meant 'wonder' in the first line or 'wander'.

Wonder is - I wonder what he's doing today?

Wander is - I wandered around the school looking for him.

I guess either could work, but I wasn't sure if you had mixed it up or not. (Because you talk about walking which made me think 'wander' but then you say ponder which made me think 'wonder') Anyways, I'd thought that I would ask.

I actually find this a short and sweet poem. It show rather simply exactly what each of us wonder "why are we here?" But the wise finally realize (as you have) that it doesn't really matter why we are here. It was a gift given to us from G-d and that's what really matters.
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