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Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
So glad this is on the main page! Yay!
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08-01-2004
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
Just wanted you to know I've been back to this a ton of times and my youngest one has opted it in lieu of his bedtime story a night or two. :-) What can I say? He's got taste! LOL. I catch myself repeating lines from it at work as well. :-) Just wanted to come back and say thank you once more.
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07-29-2004
Christopher Doss
lol...this was really fun to read. I bet kids would like it a lot. I, too, stumbled over the three lines starting with "There's". I think because it should be "There are" as apposed to "There is". At least I think so...lol. Man, now I'm confusing myself! Someone help me..lol
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07-29-2004
Toni Sweeney
LOL!!! That was so cool it was challanging to read becausee if you read to fast you would not get it. Try saying the first line 5 times fast. I was not able to. Keep up the good work
Toni S.
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07-26-2004
Heather Jackson
This was SO much fun to read!!!
As much as I dislike Wee Waa things, I didn't mind them so much here...and though they are never identified by translation (wee waa are insects, for example) there's never a question that these are all the creeping crawling flying nasty little bugs. Fun!
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07-20-2004
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
LOL... I absolutely Luv'd this! I am printing it right now so I can share it with my children when I get home. I think I'll share it with me work mates as well. ;-) This is AWESOME! Only awkward line to read really (for me) was
"Theres creepies come out in the night" but then again, that was my first read through. I'll have another read through and perhaps it will read smoother. Thanks for starting my day out with a smile. :-)
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