  09-27-2004 Stefanie Mendoza
Yeah,
I think everybody has that one person in their day that they just don't wanna see. I like this poem a lot! It really gets to the heart of the matter with a few short, but strong words. Great job!
~Steffie~
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 08-19-2004 Travis Bauer
This is good. It's short and still has a big meaning. You have people that you just don't want to have to put up with on certain days.
Travis B.
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08-17-2004 Sarah B.
should the part 2 be about the same thing?
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08-17-2004 Sarah B.
that's funny jen!!
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  08-11-2004 Jeniffer Brand
I liked that very much. Short and sweet! Sounds like "me" growing up telling my parents that!! hehehehe.
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08-09-2004 Sarah B.
thanks guys
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  08-07-2004 Sammy A.
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  08-07-2004 Sammy A.
I like it! It sort of like this person at my school who just complains all day long. And she was my friend.
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08-05-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
Ahhh... some people are mental vampires...sucking the life right out of you> Yeah, I don't have time for them either. :-)
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   08-03-2004 Emily Garwood
very nice poem i especially like the bit about the candle it just seems to fit together keep writing and let that talent of yours shine ^-^` hope to read more!
Emy
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07-27-2004 Jack Curson
I have had moments like this, sometimes the person you are trying to get away from just doesn't get the picture. Nice work.
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07-24-2004 Caitlin M.
This is great, you should make a part two or something.
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07-23-2004 Mika L.
I like it. Even my friend likes it. I think lisa is right. The title does sound a bit sad. Nice poem.
Mika L.
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   07-21-2004 Lisa A.
though the topic is somewhat sad, i find this poem very refreshing! you've got the talent to get your point across in as few lines as possible. nice work!
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  07-20-2004 Toni Sweeney
Hi Sarah. This is a great poem. My favorite part was the 3rd and 4th lines. On the I you need to capatililze them rasther then that I see no mistakes. Keep up the good work.
Toni S.
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