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Love is like a Roller Coaster ride.
by Paula T. (Age: 15)
copyright 07-29-2004


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  Love is like a Roller Coaster ride.
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Love is like a roller coaster ride
It has its up and downs.

Love is like a roller coaster ride
It can make you nauseous or it can be real sweet.

Love is like a roller coaster ride
you don't always know what to expect.

But once you find the perfect one.....
You wanna go again.


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06-02-2005 Leigh G.    

I have no EXP but I like the pome. I am better at writing songs. You are lucky to be able to write like this. Do YUO have anay EXP?


03-28-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

And again and again and again and again and again....ect., ect, ect! This is great. Thanks, Anthony


12-07-2004 SamiJo Mcquiston    

P.S.
Love the picture!


12-07-2004 SamiJo Mcquiston    

Oh, what a wonderful thing to compare love to.
It works so wonderfully.
I love going on rollercoasters, again, and again, and again. I can't help it!
Keep up the good work!


10-04-2004 Buddy Ales    

Aye, tis so true. How ironic that when I start this I think of somethign and "My Only Love" starts? =_= Yes, tis true that love has its ups and downs. Aye, can't know what to expect of it. Sei, once ye' finds thy perfect one thy wants to go again. Nauseous, aye, can be that way. It can also be sweet, which are the times one must cherish and remember. But yes, this poem is so true, love is the truest of all feelings. Decieving but true, tis why I write about it much.


07-31-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Very sweet, and very true. Always remember when you're down...there's an UP coming around the bend. :-) Hang on and hang in there. :-)


07-28-2004 Regina S.    

Kinda short, but WAY sweet! ^-^


07-27-2004 Christopher Doss    

This is really cute, keep up the writing. I did notice on the second line, "it's" needs to be changed to "its". I really liked the last two lines :)


07-27-2004 Toni Sweeney    

Love is defenitly like a roller coaster. You explained it perfectly. I believe I found one spelling error. I'm not sure so you may want to ask someone before you change it. I believe the word nacious is spelled incorectly.
Toni S.


07-26-2004 Heather Jackson    

Very sweet poem.

Be careful with your spelling; using Charlie to help you may show you mistakes you might have missed.

One of the things I learned to help me remember the difference between "it's" and "its" was "yours". If something is yours...that is Y-O-U-R-S, no apostrophe. The same goes for it possessive... I-T-S "its". "It's" is the contraction of "it" and "is" or "it" and "has".

And great try on "nacious"...I knew what you were trying to say there. Try "nauseous" instead.

Keep it up!


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