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Love is like a Roller Coaster ride.

by Paula Tsvayg (Age: 21)
copyright 07-25-2004


Age Rating: 7 +
Love is like a Roller Coaster ride.


Love is like a roller coaster ride
It has its up and downs.

Love is like a roller coaster ride
It can make you nauseous or it can be real sweet.

Love is like a roller coaster ride
you don't always know what to expect.

But once you find the perfect one.....
You wanna go again.






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        10-14-2013     Rachel Brown        

A Perfect love poem for
people who really are deeply in love with each other .
I really enjoyed this beautifully sweet poem.
Nice Work can't wait to read more.
Thanks for sharing .

        11-14-2012     jacqueline farjeat        

i actually love this

        06-02-2005     Leigh Gilholm Fisher        

I have no EXP but I like the pome. I am better at writing songs. You are lucky to be able to write like this. Do YUO have anay EXP?

        03-28-2005     Anthony Lane Stahlhut        

And again and again and again and again and again....ect., ect, ect! This is great. Thanks, Anthony

        12-07-2004     SamiJo Mcquiston        

P.S.
Love the picture!

        12-07-2004     SamiJo Mcquiston        

Oh, what a wonderful thing to compare love to.
It works so wonderfully.
I love going on rollercoasters, again, and again, and again. I can't help it!
Keep up the good work!

        10-04-2004     Buddy Ales        

Aye, tis so true. How ironic that when I start this I think of somethign and "My Only Love" starts? =_= Yes, tis true that love has its ups and downs. Aye, can't know what to expect of it. Sei, once ye' finds thy perfect one thy wants to go again. Nauseous, aye, can be that way. It can also be sweet, which are the times one must cherish and remember. But yes, this poem is so true, love is the truest of all feelings. Decieving but true, tis why I write about it much.

        07-31-2004     Mary -BrytEyz- Ball        

Very sweet, and very true. Always remember when you're down...there's an UP coming around the bend. :-) Hang on and hang in there. :-)

        07-28-2004     Regina S.        

Kinda short, but WAY sweet! ^-^

        07-27-2004     Christopher Doss        

This is really cute, keep up the writing. I did notice on the second line, "it's" needs to be changed to "its". I really liked the last two lines :)

        07-27-2004     Toni Sweeney        

Love is defenitly like a roller coaster. You explained it perfectly. I believe I found one spelling error. I'm not sure so you may want to ask someone before you change it. I believe the word nacious is spelled incorectly.
Toni S.

        07-26-2004     Heather Jackson        

Very sweet poem.

Be careful with your spelling; using Charlie to help you may show you mistakes you might have missed.

One of the things I learned to help me remember the difference between "it's" and "its" was "yours". If something is yours...that is Y-O-U-R-S, no apostrophe. The same goes for it possessive... I-T-S "its". "It's" is the contraction of "it" and "is" or "it" and "has".

And great try on "nacious"...I knew what you were trying to say there. Try "nauseous" instead.

Keep it up!



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