 05-25-2006 Vicki G.
Aw, I really needed this. I just wish someone would be there for me right now. Thanks. (in a good way)
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06-09-2005 Andrew Findlay
Short but sweet. I used to feel as though no one believed in me, but then Sailor Mercury saved me. Sailor Mercury believes in me always, even when I mess up (which I often do). I'm sure you have people who believe in you also, though you may not always know it.
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11-13-2004 Lauren T.
Nice poem! some times I feal like that too,Like no one cares what you say or do because they only do stuff thats "Cool".Sometimes I feal like that.
-Sailor starflame
A_A
(^.^)
~(0(0)
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09-27-2004 Stefanie Mendoza
I think we all feel this at some point or another. It's really hurtful sometimes, but you just gotta get through it and keep on trying. We all believe in you here!!!! Lol, good job!
~Steffie~
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09-02-2004 Kaitie Mcquiston
I know how you feel..when it seems like its never good enough and no matter what you just cant win..but it does get better...good job very realistic
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08-21-2004 Jenna T.
Cute but quite short. If there was another verse maybe it would be better. I feel this way all the time! Sometimes you just feel like no one understands you... Good job
~jenna~
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08-19-2004 Travis Bauer
Well well well. Another poem I can relate to. Don't worry though, People do beleive in you. Even if they don't, I do. Very good short write.
Travis B.
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08-11-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
I liked this as well for the same reason I like your other works... it's honest and heartfelt.
I read everyone's comments and as for a part two, should you decide to do one, I'd write about where you'd LIKE to go, where people DO believe in you, and what you'd like that place to be like. You've asked that you wanted to be taken someplace... now tell the reader where you want to go.
I really like Toni S.'s comment at the end where it says you should believe in yourself. When you do, it doesn't really matter so much what other people think. It's like this... if I say the sky is blue and someone else say's it's black... who cares? I know I'm right and that's the end of story. I shrug and walk away. No argument, no fight, and no hard feelings. It's the same when you believe in yourself, you just don't care so much what others think because you know the truth!
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08-09-2004 Sarah B.
what should the part 2 be about?
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08-08-2004 Paula T.
good poem. I agree with Lisa. you have some grammar mistakes with punctuation marks. i enjoyed reading this poem. Maybe you should write
a part 2, but it depends on how you feel.
The last sentence sounds a little weird, like Mika said. But I understand what you're saying. It's a good poem.
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08-01-2004 Mika L.
Well I like it but I think the last sentence sounds a bit weird.
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07-30-2004 Caitlin M.
It was pretty short but hey your new so I'll cut you some slack. :)
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07-29-2004 Sarah B.
thanks you guys for the nice comments. do you think I should make a part two about people who do belive in me?
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07-29-2004 Christopher Doss
For whatever reason I enjoy shorter poems the best. Maybe that is why I'm a huge Haiku fan.
I feel a touch of sadness and confusion here, along with a hope for a time of change. Those are the thoughts that went through my mind when I read it.
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07-27-2004 Toni Sweeney
There is always one person in your life that believes in you. We here at pnp believe in you and you should believe in yourself.
Toni S.
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07-27-2004 Lisa A.
this is a good poem! it is made up of very few words, yet the meaning is strong. oen suggestion: go back and work on your punctuation. too many commas can call for too many pauses and breaks in the poem. if you are asking a question, always use a question mark unless you mean it as a statement. hope i helped!
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