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Pets' Memories...
by Jackie Edwards (Age: 22)
copyright 05-02-2006


Age Rating: 4 to 127

 
A/N: In honor of my beloved dog, Schatzie, who died two weeks ago. May she rest in peace, and may this poem comfort those who have suffered the loss of a pet. God bless.
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Pets' Memories...



When I think of love,

I think of the love a dog has for its master.

Always kind and loyal,

Never going sour.

That love has its limits,

As do our lives,

But love will not die.

It does not die when,

By a tragedy,

They are laid to rest.

It does not end when,

By a tragic twist of fate,

Their lives do.

Instead,

Love moves ever forward.

Like a river,

Running far and wide.

It’s deeper than the ocean,

And higher than the skies above,

Is our pet’s love.

And when their gone,

Do not be sad.

Instead,

Be glad that you had them,

Whether their time was long or short.

And smile because they loved you.

Their only means a new chapter to them,

One full of joy and peace.

Pain and suffering will be long gone,

As far from their minds as the East is to the West,

And they’ll be under the angels’ care.

When our time has come to an end,

And we go to our mansion in the sky,

We’ll see them there, waiting for us,

And they’ll greet us like not a minute’s gone by.

Though now you are grieving,

They are there.

We can’t see them now,

But they are watching over us,

Protecting us.

God and his angels will keep them safe,

Until we return home.

Though our journey there will be long and hard,

Our faithful companions long deceased will wait.

And when we walk through the pearly gates,

They’ll run up and start licking your face,

Wagging their tail,

And beg for you to play with them,

As if in apology for leaving so suddenly.

They want to see you smile,

And want to make you happy.

If heaven doesn’t have dogs,

It won’t be heaven.

Dogs have souls,

Cats do too,

So when they die,

They’ll have to go there,

Since they haven’t sinned,

And are God’s pets.

If heaven doesn’t have dogs and cats,

Then what will heaven be like?

Boring,

Like some books may portray it?

Yes,

We’ll praise God,

But he’d better have the animals there.

Because if I don’t get to see my dogs again,

I’d rather die a thousand times.

My dog was my confident for when I was sad,

And would play with me when I was mad.

Without her here,

A piece has been taken from the puzzle,

And it won’t fit right together anymore.

I’ll miss her and Major,

But I know I’ll get to see them again someday,
And that is what gives me strength.
With that strength,
I can give comfort to those who need it,
And give them a shoulder to cry on.
With that strength,
I can change my ways,
And help out where I’m needed the most.
A dog’s passing symbolizes the closing of one chapter,
But the beginning of a new chapter.
Just like our passing will someday begin a new chapter for us.
Schatzie was a wonderful dog,
As was Major,
And just because they’re not here physically,
Doesn’t mean that they can’t comfort me.
I take refuge in the memory of them,
And it’s like a security blanket.
…If heaven doesn’t have dogs, I’m lodging a complaint.




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08-05-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Your emotions are easily read and very understandable. Obviously, God wants us to have the animals around us... he made the earth so full of them and even let Adam help to name them. :-) Why would he make us care so much for animals, instruct us to be nice to them in the Bible, and then take them away from us after the Great Resurrection. Ahh..but I don't think so. I honestly think that he made the animals for us and they will be there in Paradise with us as well. :-)

The poem was structured strangely, double lines and thoughts that jumped around. Thanks for sharing this, though, and for being a part of PnP!


07-27-2004 Christopher Doss    

I do agree pets can be a very important part of your life. They can add so much, and it can hurt when they leave. I do like a lot of your emotions here. One thing I found, however, is that it was a bit hard to follow. You seemed to skip around on thoughts and feelings. Maybe you could rewrite and group lines of similar meanings or thoughts together? Man, I'm not good at explaining myself sometimes, so I hope you understand what I mean.
You put a lot of heart and emotions in this, keep writing.


07-27-2004 Sam Hackel-Butt    

I started crying halfway through, lol. It reminded me of my dog that I had to give up because he bit my brother.


07-27-2004 Toni Sweeney    

Good poem Jackie,
In 1999 I lost a dog three days after Christmas and I still have not forgot her. Just like your dog Foxy my dog was always there whenever I needed her. I will never forget her and I can not wait till I get to see her again. A pet is someone no one can forget.
Toni S.


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