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05-17-2007
Denise Fairgrieve
This piece really does show how Usagi/Serena took the news from Luna. It would be a big change to make and understand that it can't be taken back.
Very well done.
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01-27-2007
Nazzy Griffiths
I really Loved your poem it expresses so much about Serena's life and all the challenges she had to face.. Really well done
love it lol
wuv nay
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12-21-2004
Andrew Findlay
I think this poem really makes the reader know what Sailor Moon went through when she became Sailor Moon. All the words you chose were great, I especially liked the line 'My volcano of emotions.'Good work as usual!
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08-23-2004
Toni Sweeney
Awesome job. I enjoyed the last paragraph the most. I also enjoyed how weel you did to make the poem rhyme. Keep up the awesome Job!!!
Toni S.
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08-10-2004
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
Heh!
If you only knew that these are the exact same feelings so many people feel when faced with change... change into adulthood, or graduation, or entering the workforce, or getting married, or having children, or getting divorced, or re-entering the workforce, or facing life alone due to death... see? So many times we're faced with change and every time we take a deep breath and GO!
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