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Changes (A Sailor Moon-based poem)
by Jenna T. (Age: 15)
copyright 08-21-2004


Age Rating: 10 to 127

  Changes (A Sailor Moon-based poem)
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I have to face my fears
Gather up my strength and GO!
I'm forced to fly away
From the life I used to know

Everything around me spins,
Faster and faster, It never ends,
I'm battling too many changes
My mind swirls and twists and bends

Time won't let me stop to breathe
Inside I feel lost and hurt,
My volcano of emotions
Is about ready to BURST!

I might want to give up
Or put my head down and cry,
But I'll face these changes and be reborn
And spread my wings and fly!


*Based on what I think Sailor Moon must have felt when Luna told her that she was a superhero. But anyone could feel this way too...


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05-17-2007 Denise Fairgrieve    

This piece really does show how Usagi/Serena took the news from Luna. It would be a big change to make and understand that it can't be taken back.

Very well done.


01-27-2007 Nazzy G.    

I really Loved your poem it expresses so much about Serena's life and all the challenges she had to face.. Really well done
love it lol

wuv nay


12-21-2004 Andrew Findlay    

I think this poem really makes the reader know what Sailor Moon went through when she became Sailor Moon. All the words you chose were great, I especially liked the line 'My volcano of emotions.'Good work as usual!


08-23-2004 Toni Sweeney    

Awesome job. I enjoyed the last paragraph the most. I also enjoyed how weel you did to make the poem rhyme. Keep up the awesome Job!!!
Toni S.


08-10-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Heh!

If you only knew that these are the exact same feelings so many people feel when faced with change... change into adulthood, or graduation, or entering the workforce, or getting married, or having children, or getting divorced, or re-entering the workforce, or facing life alone due to death... see? So many times we're faced with change and every time we take a deep breath and GO!


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