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Treasure in the Deep
by Amanda C. (Age: 17)
copyright 08-09-2004
Contest Winner

Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Peace for the restless
And living's for the dead.
Mercy's for the rage
Screaming in my head.

Death is for the monsters
That haunt when I don't sleep.
Flight is for the grounded.
Treasure's in the deep.

Sailing's for the nauseous
Who's problems are fair game.
Sense is for the fools
Who think that treasures' all the same.

Action's for the calm.
Civil's for the hot.
Love is for the cold
Who's stomach's tied in knots.

Free is for the claimed.
Warmth is for the sleet.
This hate is all for you,
The treasure I can't keep.

So spread your wings and fly away,
The sky you soon shall sweep!
Depart from those who shed no tears,
My treasure of the deep.


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01-27-2006 Anne-marie Hewlett    

I love the detail of the poem, good work
10-18-2004 Charlotte S.    

This poem is so pretty!
It's kinda 'bout evereything.
Very poetic!
10-11-2004 SamiJo Mcquiston    

It's truly a wonder.
Good work, I've enjoyed it very much.
I'm glad you've entered my contest.
Everything about it is so perfect, again good work.
08-06-2004 Paula T.    

wow! you're only 13? this is so great! i caNNOT BELIEVE THAT THIS IS STILL IN THE WORKSHOP! amazing poem. poetically written and professional poem. try to publish it in chicken soup!
08-06-2004 Toni Sweeney    

Great poem. My favorite part of the poem are the first two lines. I found two mistakes in the poem one is I don't believe that sence is spelled right I believe it is spelled sense but I am not positive you may want to check with someone else first. The second mistake is spred. Spred should be spelled spread. rather then those two mistakes awesome job.
Toni S.
08-06-2004 Brittney N. N.    

Wow! Exelent poem! I didn't want ot stop reading it when it ended. Is it based on your true emotions? It sure looks like it is.
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