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Bendy Barbie ( it's a really sad story read it!)
by Sarah B. (Age: 14)
copyright 08-11-2004


Age Rating: 4 to 127

 
Ever since I was 4 years old I had wanted a bendy barbie. I loved barbies so much I played every single day. Every birthday list and every christmas list bendy barbie. One christmas I didn't get a bendy barbie instead I got a barbie motorhome. I had wanted
one of those to, but not as much as a bendy barbie.

Then another year passed by, I put Bendy Barbie on the christmas list again. On christmas morning we ate breakfast we looked through our stockings we ate candy, then it was time to open the presents. I of course was the present passer again, we went through all the present exept for two, Caitlin's (my sister) and mine. They were both in the shape of a barbie box. We opened ours at the same time, she got a bendy barbie, I got a box of chocolates.

I was sad, but I didn't show it because then I would feel bad. I was pretending to be excited. I still haven't gotten a bendy barbie, and I am 11 now.


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08-16-2005 Alma H.    

That is so sad.You were the one that wanted bendey barbie but your sis got it.Revenge!!lol.
I have dolls too.


06-12-2005 Jenna T.    

Barbies rock :) LOL I love collecting them. I have a bendy barbie myself. To be honest with you, I didn't like it as much as my NON bendy ones! LOL

Jenna T.


05-20-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

That was a cute story. I hope you get your barbie soon. Keep your hopes up and do those extra choors and stuff anyway! Some day you will have your doll! Thanks, Anthony


01-03-2005 Sarah B.    

No my sis is wrong she just makes me look stupid sorry.


12-30-2004 Sarah B.    

This is sarah's sis and I would just like everyone to know that this story is wrong... i got the bendy barbie on my b-day from a friend.. way to get the facts strait.. lol.. next time Sarah should check the facts.. silly!

Much love
Caiti


12-19-2004 Lauren T.    

Good write


11-12-2004 Sarah B.    

I PLAYED BARBIES YESTERDAY!!!!!! all by myself though.


09-26-2004 Stefanie Mendoza    

Sarah,
Ever since I was a little girl, my mother always left a holiday Barbie under the tree for me. It's a tradition we continue to this very day, I still wake up every Christmas morning to find that one unmistakable gift under the tree. I hope that one day your parents will see what this gift means to you and perhaps Bendy Barbie will make her much anticipated appearence under the tree this year.

~Steffie~


08-19-2004 Sarah B.    

oooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh, so your the one who gave me those points I thought it was Travis. THANK YOU BOB!!!!!



08-19-2004 Robert Betts    

A very nice story, very well done.


08-13-2004 Sam Hackel-Butt    

Barbie's aren't what they used to be. Now when I was little, Barbie's were great. None of them did all the things they did today. They were just dolls without an occupation so you could with them as you please. I only stopped playing Barbie's when I was thirteen. I gave away some, but my favorties are in a box under my bed :D It's nice to take them out once in a while and remember those fun games.

But don't worry about that Barbie you must have. You'll get it, and then within a few weeks you'll be after a new one. Trust me. But as Regina said, do some extra chores for a bit of cash.


08-10-2004 Caitlin M.    

Your such a drama queen! I always wanted this toy and when I got it it broke. lol, Cute and sad story.


08-09-2004 Sarah B.    

Thank you very much for the comments and the praise points.


08-08-2004 Paula T.    

That's a great story! It is sad! Did you inform your parents that you wanted a Bendy Barbie. Parents are very weird. Anyway, for a first story, this is a great story! You are very talented.

~*Paula*~


08-06-2004 Regina S.    

Sarah, this is really sad and touching. But, 'want' is not a very good thing to have especially if you're dependant on others. Yeah, parents are weird and mess up a lot and will never know how we really feel, but if you really want something so badly, get it yourself, that way it'll mean more! Ask your parents if you can do extra chores for money. Try to see if anyone will let you do some odd jobs for money. A friendly neighbor or someone. Then start saving all your money until you have enough to buy the Barbie! ^-^ I'm proud of you for not showing your dissapointment at the candy and throwing a tantrum. That shows you're a very mature person! ^-~ Keep writing, you're pretty good at it! =D


08-06-2004 Sarah B.    

What do you think of my very first story!!???



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