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Just Bleeds
by Irina Guschina (Age: 53)
copyright 08-07-2004


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
(Choka)

Promise me, promise…
If you feel tired to love,
If you feel tired,
Holding my heart in your arms,
Just throw it away.

My dying heart feels nothing,
Just bleeds in the dark, just bleeds...


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03-11-2005 Chelsea Armstrong    

It takes very little words for one to paint a picture of how we are feeling inside.
Great job.
12-18-2004 Mervin H. Dochterman    

You seem to have a talent of speaking volumes in so few words, conveying your message very effectively.
Well, done Irina.
Mervin H.
08-30-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

A very deep and selfless love is expressed here. What the world would be if they took instruction from thee! What the world would see if they looked... I'd surely like to see! :-)
08-23-2004 Lyle Berry    

Always, ever always, I am amazed how you succeed in saying so much in these Choka that you write. They are rich with meaning and so powerful with the emotions they express.

Warm Hugs!
Lyle
08-22-2004 Gregory Christiano    

Strong emotion and depth. As always you say so much in just a few defining words. Wonderful, Irina. I always look forward to reading your work.
08-14-2004 Joan Jotz    

Irina,
Wonderful choka....passionate and consuming.
Fix one line;
"just throw away it" --> Just throw it away.'

Take care, Joan
08-09-2004 Nancy Pawley    

Irina, this cuts to the quick of the matter; got to say that I've lived every line. Fantastic work.
Nancy
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