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The Fateful Day

by Mika Lee (Age: 20)
copyright 08-10-2004


Age Rating: 7 +

One day me and Jane were really enjoying ourselfs, we laughed, we played, we shouted. We were having the tome of out lives until that fateful day.
Just a couple week before it happened she told me about it. She was leaving to Korea on July 10th and going to her cousins at June 31. She also told me she was having a goodbye party at her friends house.
I felt soo sad. I felt like I was going to cry any second. I quickly ran home. I sneaked through my parents and ran up to my room of my mansion and jumped on the bed and started crying.
I thought all of my friends are leaving now! Jenny, Shanaz, and now Jane. This is soo unfair, I want to go along with Jane. I HATE MY LIFE!
Even my parents are awful! I like my real mom! Not my step-mom! I couldn't sleep at all that night. I felt a bit more happier. I thought I would make the best of her time in America.
Everyday I asked if she could sleepover and evrytime my mom took me shopping, I would ask her if she could come along. Everytime we went shopping she looked at the watches always but she never bought one. She said she needed one so I thought I would give her one for a present.
On the day of her goodbye party(which took place at her friends house which is really huge) every second I felt like crying but I was enjoying myself. We played Dance Dance Revolution all the way from 5:00 pm-1:00am. Even if we were all so tired, we never stopped. We all took turns. There were a bunch of people, Jane L, me, Mandy L, Lydia, Ashley C., Euna, Julia Y, and Kathleen W. We weren't sleepy at all.
When we had to sleep cause of Kathleen's parents we still stayed on the ground floor and had a pillow fight and everything, we read anime books, played game boy, and a lot more.
We talked about things too. When everyone seemed to have fallen asleep, Jane and I were still awake. Jane seemed to be crying, same with me. I wondered if she missed me a lot too.
When she came home, I slept over at her house. Right before the day she went my dad took us both to Annapolis and we rode on a boat, bought souveniers, and etc. After that we came home she slept over at my house. We stayed up the whole night and watched Tv, role plaed anime, and a bunch more.
The next day she left and I felt soo sad. I started dedicating a lot of my work to her. I hope I can see her again someday.

(Part of this is really true and a little I twisted up)






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        10-23-2005     Lyra Meurer        

A nice rant Mika... A lot of my best friends moved away too...

        04-25-2005     Mika Lee        

I really miss Jane. I wanna see her so badly.

        04-16-2005     Tori Lang        

This story speaks of lost love and the heart aching pain that goes with it.The way you remember every second, every sound and every smell.Love is....

        01-17-2005     usprincess123        

This is a very good, sad, and emotional story. There were a few grammar and spelling mistakes in the beginning, but all-in-all the story is good. You really express how you feel. I think this is really good work.

        09-13-2004     Jane Lee        

One thing for sure. I don't think you cry that much in my opinion compared to me.

        09-08-2004     Paula Tsvayg        

Well, both of you guys really, really, miss each other, that part is evident.
But you can still commmunicate, after all this, is the year of modern technology!



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