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Weep
by Sam Hackel-Butt (Age: 19)
copyright 08-16-2004
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Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
**I'm not sure if i want to keep it as a poem, or make it into a song. Hmm, decisions decisions. Not sure of a title either, so i'll put it as Weep.**


Weep for the child whose life was taken.
Who was found on the sidewalk.
Cry for the child, whose mother never knew
What became of her baby boy.

Shiver for the child, who came from a broken home,
And left to escape the broken hearts.
Bawl for the child, who never knew loves warmth,
Who never tasted the sweetness of life.

Shout to the heavens, for some sort of answer,
For an answer to why this is done.
For we know we will never understand
Without a guiding star
To lead us through the fog.

Laugh for the child whose finally found some worth
In the arms of an angel, he smiles.
Reach for the child who’s trapped within us
To free him from the prison bonds.

Dance in the streets with joy,
Live our lives to the brim,
Smile for those who can’t.
And laugh for those who won’t.

And sing to the heavens,
And sing with your heart,
Let its amusement flow through your veins
As you dance in the rain.

Shout to the heavens, for some sort of answer,
For an answer to why this is done.
For we know we will never, understand
Without a guiding star
To lead us through the fog.

Scream at the top of your lungs.
The mother has found her baby boy.
He never left home, never left her sight,
He was found in her heart.

So at the funeral day, then the burial,
The boy lived yet again.
With the light of love, strong on his face,
His father finally came home.
The irony that it took his life
To gain what he always yearned for.

So, Shout to the heavens, for some sort of answer,
For an answer to why this is done.
For we know we will never understand
Without a guiding star
To lead us through the fog.


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05-21-2007 Leigh G.    

Wow...quite impressive. I'm not entirely sure why it has such an effect on me, because my interest wasn't very sparked in the beginning but at the end, I was quite captivated. This was a sad kind of poem/song, so I enjoyed it. What I'm having a hard time with is this song I'm working on, "It's Better This Way" which I plan on submitting on Wednesday if I can complete it, which is torn in the fact that I can the chorus rhyme, and only half the rest of the poem rhyme. Rhyming didn't come with my initial soft wear, it had to be installed and the program is malfunctioning. :p Basically, I really like the first paragraph that rhymes, then I have the chorus, but the next paragraph is stunted because I cannot make it rhyme, and I don't want to scrap the rhymes in the first paragraph. >.< Anyway, sorry for the ramblings! This was a very good piece, good work and keep writing! I can't pick on ya for capitalization, either. :p


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09-18-2005 Alma H.    

wow..that was so peaceful.I could read it a million times.;)


03-03-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

You can be so complex at times. This poem is wonderful I was thinking all the while I was reading it that I was amazed at how it made my mind wander. Thanks, Anthony


09-02-2004 Kaitie Mcquiston    

you get a thumbs up!!! I know that is really korney but for lack of something better to say...I really enjoyed it


08-29-2004 Tara M.    

WOW! This poem is awesome! Keep it up!
Tara
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08-19-2004 Travis Bauer    

This poem is great. The only thing that may possibly be changed if you want to is that every stanza you go from four to five to six lines. Nothing wrong with it though. And if you are looking for a title, "In Our Hearts" fits in my opinion. Great write. Keep it up.
Travis B.


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