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Tainted
by Beverley McInnis
copyright 09-01-2001


Age Rating: 18 to 127

 
Why are you so nice to me?
When others kick and stomp
When I'm down and in the mud

Why are you so kind to me?
When I refuse to hold your hand
When I feel strange giving you a hug

Why are you so sweet?
When I sour our every conversation
When I fight you every step

Why do you love me?
When I don't even love myself
Yet


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01-11-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Good emotions, Anthony


09-28-2001 Celeste Wilson    

This I love. Expresses the true meaning of love.


09-09-2001 Beverley McInnis    

Thank you again for all the comments. Everyone sure gives a person much to think about in the comment area...around the issue of showing affection, loving unconditionally and raising children with strong self images.

Now, while this poem definitely reflects the many children/youth that I see around me....the poem was actually written based on an adult. Who has been growing more secure every day with recieving affection....affection that as a child somehow was missed.

So it does come around in a circle...childhood, youth, adult. :-)


09-03-2001 Beverley McInnis    

...and wonderful comments and insight from everyone, thank you. Very true, unconditional love given often does turn a person around. For when one is loved without conditions, one may then begin to see the beauty within and love self. At the least, it confuses the heck out of someone who is trying so hard to be "solid, strong and without feelings." **g**


09-03-2001 Beverley McInnis    

John, you've known me for awhile now **smiling** Would I suffer from such low self esteem? Nah...this is based on truth, only it's not my truth, rather the truth of another.


09-02-2001 John Mcleod    

WOW! Bev! I LOVED THIS! I know this is poetic etc. etc. etc...... but if you were saying this for real I would say, "Love yourself Bev"
For loving yourself brings out the best in one, others pick up on that good feeling thus joining in on it.
A great write,


jm


09-02-2001 Betty Eskdale    

Unconditional love, a wondrous thing...


09-01-2001 Renee Gonzales    

The yet in there leaves room for hope :). Very nice.


09-01-2001 Renee Gonzales    

The yet in there leaves room for hope :). Very nice.


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