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When your friends suddenly disappear, and those who you saw every day of your life you only know through pixels, it's a painful time for everybody. This was a short poem, but meaningful at that. I hope to see many more like this one, and as you said, time is something ever flowing. It never stops, even when we wish it would, it also is something that heals us. Time will never end, even if we wish it would at times. I couldn't find any typos, even though you can lower the age rating to 7+ I'd say. Good work, keep writing!
You know girly, I was an army brat! One thing I quickly learned was that this is a small world. You say good-bye to so many people you meet, but then hello to so many you meet. And some of them you may meet again. I promise you, I've met my best friend again after all these years here where I live. And I've met some friends again going through that path. Just live and learn. Get experience and make friends. It will make you who are you are in the future.
Hi Jane,
It must be interesting, living in Korea. I'm sure you dearly miss all your friends, and this is a warm tribute to their friendship.
"Even though a day has passed
[That far away]
How can I forget?<--(add a ? here.)
The phrase I put in brackets does not really convey what I think you mean to the reader. It's a fragment, it doesn't really connect the two lines before and after it. You may want to re-write this, maybe something like:
And I'm so far away.... Something that makes it a bit more personal.
Gives this one a little more polish, it's a good start.
Welcome !
