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I had to read this a few times to understand what you were talking about. I don't understand the way you write yet so I don't know if you have typos or if you meant to do that, I will have to read more of you work to know. I only have one thing I must say. This came to mind as I read you words, - Oh that I had in the wilderness a lodging place of wayfaring men; that I might leave my people, and go from them. Jeremiah 9:2
Good Job. I really like it.
Very powerful imagery of a perverted or perhaps overloaded mind, walking but not awake to his turmoil, not aware of his inner implosion. Many people their soul, to vice, money and illusion, to end up in a state of despair, in a quandary, between the living and the dead!