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Like a stone
by Sammy A. (Age: 17)
copyright 12-03-2004


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There has to be a story behind those kind eyes. Is it a selfish story? Is it sad? Painful? Could it be he doesn't want any complaining from me? Could he just want to get close to hurt me? Or is it something he doesn't want tell to that could slowly be killing him? Almost like a disease that medicine can't cure? I wish he'd open up to me if not anyone else.
It could kill him. Crush him like a stone.


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06-06-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

Wow Sammy,
I see this as a great write. I cannot agree with the others. This deserves more. The closing line blew me away.

Thank you for this,

Rich
09-02-2005 Jennifer Campbell-Kletzli    

This poem almost describes my dad. He's such a hard person to read! But then again, aren't most men? Good poem Sammy.
06-22-2005 Paul Kangas    

This is really good. Yeah, it is really hard for some guys to open up, but I guess things take time... Sometimes they are nervous, or afraid of not being accepted.
03-20-2005 David Pekrul    

A simple story that says so much. I guess guys just don't open up as much as one may like. I know I don't. It must be a 'guy' thing. Anyway, thanks for the write.

David Pekrul
01-27-2005 Lisa A.    

luv the poem. consider adding stanzas, it makes the poem look purddy.
-Lissers
12-07-2004 Jenna T.    

I LOVE this! Kudos to you for using a different style (maybe you've written something like this already but I haven't seen it) in poetry. I really like the meaning and emotion in this! Great work, keep it up!

~Jenna T.
12-05-2004 Carmen C.    

I love this poem of yours! It's perfectly understandable, and well, I just love it!
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