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I'm only a Whisper Away

by Jane Lee (Age: 23)
copyright 08-20-2004

Age Rating: 7 +
I'm only a Whisper Away
Picture Credits: I drew this myself.

Do you miss me when I'm not there?
Will you remember all the good times we've had?
The hardest thing about leaving,
Is saying goodbye to you.

In your dreams,
I'll be right there.
I'll be waiting just for you.

You are a special someone to me,
And your friendship is something money can't buy.
No matter what...

I'll miss you more than anything but,
I'll only be a whisper away

(This is dedicated to my special friends I left while moving to Korea)

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        05-26-2006     Leigh Gilholm Fisher        

It's very nice that you dedicate so many poems to your friends back at home. We all care about our friends, and that friendship is something that truly is impossible to buy. No matter how much money you have, friendship is simple, yet incredible priceless. This is a wonderful, and a meaningful poem. I also like the picture you draw, good work on that too! Sorry for not reading sooner, finals... Anyhow, this is a really great poem! Starting each line with a capital letter would be nice, but aside from that I can't find any spelling or grammar errors. Good work, keep writing!

Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders

        03-11-2005     Anthony Lane Stahlhut        

This is a sweet poem and I am sure all your friends miss you,too! remember to always meet here so you can stay in touch. Thanks, Anthony

        03-09-2005     Lucy Suzume Qian        

I really like this poem, it's so...........meaningful!!!!!!!! (Lol, couldn't think of a better word!!!!!!!! >.<) I like it!

        02-19-2005     hedwig        

The picture goes great. And I went through the same thing too. I'm sorry for drowning you in comments, your work is so good!

        01-06-2005     Kevin (Buddy) Ales        

This would be excellent to put music to. In fact, I came up with a little melody for it just while sitting here! :-) Its an excellent write, Jane!

        09-11-2004     Alixandria Warren        

        09-05-2004     Riley Mackenzie        

great job! i just had a good friend of mine move back to Korea, so i can relate a lot to your theming^-^ again, great, but maybe a little more balance and rhythme..?

just a thought

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