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05-26-2006
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
It's very nice that you dedicate so many poems to your friends back at home. We all care about our friends, and that friendship is something that truly is impossible to buy. No matter how much money you have, friendship is simple, yet incredible priceless. This is a wonderful, and a meaningful poem. I also like the picture you draw, good work on that too! Sorry for not reading sooner, finals... Anyhow, this is a really great poem! Starting each line with a capital letter would be nice, but aside from that I can't find any spelling or grammar errors. Good work, keep writing!
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
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03-11-2005
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
This is a sweet poem and I am sure all your friends miss you,too! remember to always meet here so you can stay in touch. Thanks, Anthony
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03-09-2005
Lucy Suzume Qian
I really like this poem, it's so...........meaningful!!!!!!!! (Lol, couldn't think of a better word!!!!!!!! >.<) I like it!
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02-19-2005
hedwig
The picture goes great. And I went through the same thing too. I'm sorry for drowning you in comments, your work is so good!
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01-06-2005
Buddy Ales
This would be excellent to put music to. In fact, I came up with a little melody for it just while sitting here! :-) Its an excellent write, Jane!
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09-11-2004
Alixandria Warren
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09-05-2004
Riley Mackenzie
great job! i just had a good friend of mine move back to Korea, so i can relate a lot to your theming^-^ again, great, but maybe a little more balance and rhythme..?
just a thought
-Riley^-^
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