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Agnostic Sushi (I'm also going to reply to all notes again...my computer screen blew up and I'm on a public one so I'm going to try soon!)
by Yuushi Rose
copyright 09-02-2001


Age Rating: 18 to 127

 
So everybody knows....my comp screen blew up so I'm on a public comp right now. I'll return all notes as soon as we get it fixed. So sorry!


Crucified Angel
Put the cross in a stachel
Ice cold and glaciel
Watch the sky turn pastel

Silently willing
Life demons are watching
Toll so billing
The blood is blotching

Saturated hate
Novicane in your veins
On a later date
To watch the dancing canes

Upon the Ceiling
Tormented rests the soul
Always killing
The darkening scroll

Shadowing the sky
Look up to the stars
Birds fly
Watch it all from mars

The crucified Angel
Silently willing
And The Saturated Hate
Upon the ceiling


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09-25-2001 Michiru Kaioh    

Wow, I feel special... I understood this... That may seem scary, but it is true. It makes sense to me... Of course, usually that makes other people scared. I love you!
09-04-2001 Beverley McInnis    

Well, I am a lover of symbolism and writing in abstract....still you lost me on this one. I love darkness in poems and tons of abstract depth, however, this poem is simply twists/turns which are not fitting together. In my opinion, the title really off-set your poem as it doesn't seem to fit at all (and is far too long). Anyhow, I think you have an idea going here, run with it, tighten up your symbols and create a title which reflects what you want the message in your poem to be.
09-02-2001 John Mcleod    

Geez! Yuushi! Sometimes I find it so hard to write a fitting comment on a piece of work. Some writing is harder to interperate as others, I will return for another elongated look later.
Very thought provoking!


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