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Could’ve Been...Lovely
by Misty Montier
copyright 08-25-2004


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
To my surprise I looked up one day and saw you standing there
Quiet though you were, I saw you, but you did not see me

I’d passed that way many times before
It was always crowded and noisy, and
Something would undoubtedly catch my attention

a whistle, a catcall, some sweet smelling cologne
rustling paper, wacky conversation, a cunning and crafty smile
and still all the while

you were there, I swear
I was blinded, and now I’m reminded
How I stepped on your toes
Rambled on about my woes
And you were there
right under my nose

But now that you’ve got my attention
My name you won’t even mention
And I’m only left to ponder
What could have been.




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01-30-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Love is hard to capture sometimes and even when you grab hold of it, it can slip away. Very nice job. Thanks for this poem, Anthony
12-25-2004 Delaney Lindley    

beautiful. Reminds you that things only happen once and need to be taken advantage of.
08-29-2004 Jack Curson    

reflection if memories of a life that has past. Wonderful write, I agree with Joan, the flow of your poem is great.
08-26-2004 Joan Jotz    

HI Misty,
I like the pace you set in this poem. Very straigh-forward and real, the reader gets a glimpse of the character's regrets and memories.
Nicely written, smooth read.
Joan
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