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Just one more, It's going to pay off in one more spin, Just one more toke and I'll quit. The words that are used to make the effect of control look less strongly attached to us! We are all addicted to things( some drugs,some cigarettes or gambling and some next weeks new shows). We hate to be without our needed things and some cannot be without. This is an important piece, Good job! Thanks, Anthony
The format lends itself nicely to the feeling of being addicted and out of control, despite the remarkably opposite claim by the subject of the poem who seems to think he/she is in control. I'm not sure you intended this, but it creates a neat effect
THAT was very good. I can picture teen-agers doing that these days to fit in. Even my days were like that. The thinner, the prettier. I just gave up. I'm not fat, but I'm not skinny either. But I am happy.
*grin* Yes, then who REALLY is control. The lies we tell ourselves in an effort paint the picture differently. Hopefully someone in need will read this. Hopefully it will help. :-)
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