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02-11-2007
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
A very sad story! When did Euna come into the picture? :) Thanks for entering my contest, sorry for not commenting sooner though i said I would...I have no excuse aside form having my best friend and editor on my @$$ all the time for updates of my new book...Mehrina is scary! Anyway, it is creepy how you, Euna, and me joined all around the same times...very creepy. I may be head in poem count, but I'm way behind in book quality! I need to submit Past Alive or Flights of Fantasy...I'll have to ask Meh which she recommends, she's the only human to have read either. Anyway, side tracked, this is a sad and interesting story, with no grammar/spelling errors I spotted. Meh would probably find some tiny, unnoticeable, little mistake somewhere (she's corrected people three times her age...), but I'm a storyline and character wise Adoublesquible, not much of a grammar/spelling critic if I can read it easily! :) Great work, keep writing!
Your friend,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
*holds up sword and sheild* To the workshops! Charge!
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01-17-2005
usprincess123
It seems that today I'm reading good emotional stories. I think that this is a very good, sad, and kind of happy story. Although your friends don't see you anyore and you don't see them, you should be happy and cherish the moments you spent with each other. It is sad because now you don't see each other. I think that this is good work!
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09-12-2004
Mika Lee
Well you missed a lot of times but I wouldn't expect for u to put all of them in 1 story
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