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Robert - wow I can feel the anger and the hurt. If this is a true story for you, isn't it great how you can vent with creative words?! I loved the ending - reference to her once being a princess but she murdered that person and now she is a frog.
I know a lot of frogs!
wow this is amazing. I feel like it's my anger when I read it. This is a very powerful piece and you put it well. As always I also love your word choice. I also love the connection to a fairy tale in it. I'm sorry this happened to you though.
Hi Bob
I read this poem and the image stayed with me and didn't leave me for days.
I think it's highly imaginative to base your poem on a fable. The dialogue that the princess deserved from the frog.
I wondered why you left out his saying to her i would have been your prince. Are you suggesting that she doesn't even deserve a frog?
Your poem is a truly educational version, in the spirit of Dreikurs the pedagogue who believes the best education is based on natural consequences.
I liked the rhythm and the concept of a "princess within"..A nice work to teach and discuss at home and in the classroom.
Barbara
This is a powerful work, and I think that it deserves full credit. There is an incredible use of imagery, as Eva said, and it speaks to me about the constant drama that surrounds our school (urgh). It has a good rhythm, comfortable to read aloud or in my head, and I absolutly love it. Nothing more to be said.
This is an incredible use of word choice and imagery, unfortunately, it reminds me of all the people I actually know that are like this. Maybe not to me, but to others.
There's always friend untill the next princess comes along and everytime your hurt p-n-p will catch you all of us will because you've done so much remember you've done good in your life so you deserve SOMEONE good....best of luck
Love
Emy
Great piece of work Bob. Though I have not read much of your work. I have to say that I am facinated by what i have so far. Your pictures are vivid like that of a rose, your emotion burns through like that of the sun.
I am sorry to have heard your Princess was really a Frog. But I hope you have found your somewhere.
Good job bob!
The world is full of greedy liars,it's weird how people can be and you have to think about the good people who trust everyone and then finds out about the evils in the world..some people just freak out and never trust anyone..I hope everyone at pnp is diffrent than that..I'm sorry to hear about princess Bob,but you really deserve a Queen.
Yeah, Mary's right!
If the going gets tough, all of us are there for you.
We'll back you up if you have trouble, need friends...
We're there to led a helping hand.
Keep that in mind....
Bob, you are the father I never had
And you've been through more than you deserve
Someday the princess will realize
that she's not entitled to the throne
Someday she'll realize that what Bob gives
Bob can surely take away
Bob... you deserve so much more. Take care and know your family is here and that not all of us are frauds.
Hey, I think it was a very touching poem and i love it, but as Paula said "if it happened to you me and all my friends are very sorry for you because you do not deserve that kind of person who is very careless and not loving". Most of your work is wonderful and great!
Yours faithfully,
Eugenia =^-^=
This is a very strong poem.
If it happened to you, I'm sorry, because nobody deserves to love some one that pretends to love them back.
This is a great poem, and I read it three times.
Bob,
A fine spinning of reality and fantasy with a caustic bite beneath the words. Oh how the truth can be easily disguised, and turn joy into pain. Never take what you see at face value as the truth...the mirror has two sides!! Gold turns to brass. You have given the reader a lesson to learn and live by.
Welcome !
