Home of: Prose, Poetry & Contests Prose-n-Poetry

Prose-n-Poetry.com

 Email Us [e-mail]
Enter our Poetry Contest and Win a Cash Prize !
Tell your friends! We Pay You to Comment!
Welcome !

Please Sign In
MemberID
password
Save Cookie?  
Get lost password

Join Us

Points Reference

NEW! PnP Contests
Member Contests
Contest Winners

Sailor Moon Home
Games

Members
Moonatics
Gold Writers
Silver Writers
Free Members

Galleries
Sailor Moon

Music
Sailor Moon
Christmas
Read !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Columns
Recipes
MoonNotes
Write !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Recipes
MoonNotes
Workshops
Poetry Workshop
Stories Workshop
Books Workshop
Reference
Poetry Help
Stories Help
F.A.Q

Programs
Sailor Moon Episodes
Banners
Resources

On Line
Elija B.
Susan Brown
Alma H.
Selena M.
4 Writers

Michelle E.
1 Free Members

5 Members
28 Guests

~*Freed Soul*~
by Lisa Anderson (Age: 18)
copyright 09-04-2004


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
In Memory of Chris Wallschlaeger: A fellow christian, neighbor, and parishner. He was 15 when he passed away.
Paddling out to sea,
The water so blue.
The water became deeper,
He didn’t know what to do.
First he went under,
Then popped up quite fast.
He realized he was drowning,
This breath was his last.
Slowly he slipped under
As he started to fade.
Finally it became dark,
As he floated and prayed.
“Take me to the heavens,
Out from the sea,
Take me to paradise,
Where my soul can be free.”
The world was gone,
And so was he.
Now in heaven,
His soul is free!

My Note: Chirs was going to be making confirmation with me this December, but recently drowned while paddling on his sail board. He was a sophmore in high school.


Spell Check Rhymer Poetry Analyst


Help Us Stop Plagiarism - Nearly all works at PnP are original. However a few people choose to plagiarize. To check, choose a phrase from the work, then either drag and drop to the search box or copy and paste. click on search and works at Google will be shown which match. Just to be sure, please do this before you recommend or rate the work highly...
Google
If you think this work is plagiarized please


Select a Random Work
from Poetry

Comments on this Article/Poem:
Click on the commenter's name to see their Author's Page

03-31-2005 Angela Toshner    

hey again. This is waht kayla thought of it. She thought it was really sad and even showed a tear. Then when I told her it was about a real person more tears came.Good poem!
10-24-2004 Mervin H. Dochterman    

I like the way you write straight from the heart. Good job Lisa. Oh so sad.
Mervin
09-06-2004 Angela Toshner    

that is soooo sad. It does remind me though of biking down by his house and where he drown that was really weird.
09-05-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

How sad. There was a boy named Steve that died before I got to see him in highschool along with the rest of our friends. It's so sad when someone dies, and especially when someone so young dies.

I have to admit that thoughts of Paradise after the great resurrection give me hope for all those who I've lost in death. That greedy creature death!
Visitor Reads: 630
Total Reads: 662
Comments: 4

Author's Page

Email the Author

Add a Comment




Favorite of:


Send Page to a Friend
Points Reference Privacy
PnP Terms of Service Contact Us
  SEO Software

Visitors
View Stats