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Hope
by Tina Z. (Age: 15)
copyright 09-11-2004


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
USA, what does it stand for anyway?
Freedom,liberty,and justice.Does it go that way?
Or is it more you say?
Is it being home safe and sound or living today?
Is it not being robbed and shot?
Is it experiencing life, or not?
Is it something we can trust?
Should we do it,or, is it a must?
Although these things I don't understand.
I'd like to learn on the other hand.
I love the USA!
And I have hope anyway!


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04-18-2006 Leigh G.    

This was a good poem, but you touched one of my ranting nerves. The US provoked the war with Iraqi, they got themselves wayin over their heads, are only spending money in some crap country, and I could go on forever about how I hate Bush and what he's done to the US. Anyhow, this is a good poem and in the long run I'm glad I read it... It's good you have hope though. I don't hate the US, I just hate Bush. And I hope that if we can get a president with half of a brain in next time, then I'll be more for the US. All the same, good work, and keep writing.

May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
05-16-2005 James Shammas    

It is a good idea. Maybe it could be presented less didactically-- Show it instead of state it. You know what I mean?

Jim
01-18-2005 Jack Curson    

Great job Tina, hope is a joyful confident expectation and is a wonderful thing to have in your life.
01-01-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

This is a idea that many work with. You did a good job of getting your point across. Thanks, Anthony
10-06-2004 Buddy Ales    

This poem is splendid! An excellent write of a free-verse. Not many people realize a free-verse when they see it, but this qualifies as one. Not all poems need to flow, esspecially not free-verse. If you meant for this to be rhymed then I must admit, yes, you may want to work on your flow and such, otherwise tis an excellent poem!
10-06-2004 Paula T.    

This is a great poem, but I agree with the others, it's a boit jerky.
Though I get what you're saying and agree with it completely!
09-29-2004 Angela Toshner    

I didnt quite understand this poem the first time I read it. Though after thinking it over a few times I got it. Great write!!
09-11-2004 Lisa A.    

nice write!
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