Always There
by
Brittney N. N.
(Age: 17)
copyright 06-27-2005
Age Rating: 10 to 127
Many people,
come through my life.
And there not always,
the sharpest knife.
But that doesn't matter,
I don't care.
All that worries me,
is that their always there.
If I fall,
and start crying.
They come to me,
and there always smiling.
If my feeling were hurt,
and I lay crying in the dirt.
They always come to my side,
and give me a shoulder while I cry.
Through all the people,
that I may see.
Not all of them,
Will be there for me.
For the choice few,
who are forever in my life.
Weather the sharpest,
or the dullest knife.
I forever hope,
you will remain in my life.
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You are right. all that matters is who was always there anyway and who bailed when times got ruff. sometimes you cant blame them for it and almost expected it from most of them anyway so they will come back and they will remain you friends but you will always know who to count on when you fall right. Great write, good job, Thank you
Brittney, besides the spelling errors mentioned, I think you have a great poem here. I love the analogy of the knives. People will come into your life and if you let them, they will cut you to pieces (figuratively), as opposed to other people who appear to be sharp, but in fact are dull knives. These people will not cut you, but will teach, sometimes the hard way, how to live a more productive life. I think your metaphors are appropriate and cleverly done. Your imagery is vivid and the flow of this poem is continuous. Great job!
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