The Moon Senshi
by
Lauren T.
(Age: 14)
copyright 07-28-2006
Age Rating: 7 to 127
Picture Credits:
Yes she is True
All of her powers are new
It started with a cat
She said the the moon is were her heart is at
she earned the friendships and trust
she must save the world, she must
she is the sailor of the moon
Sailor moon!
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A bit on the short side, but still a great poem. It shows in just a few lines Serena's life as Sailor Moon, and I'm a huge fan of Sailor Moon! I should know! Why am I complaining because it's short? Some of my own poems are even shorter!
Lauren this is a good start. But like Catlin I felt that it needed more. You haven't really descriped who Sailor Moon is, and what she's all about. I wanted to know about her life, what are her fears and thoughts.
But still a very good start, I see the potential in this for a very touching and wonderful poem, over all a good effort.
Tabby.