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Richard Reed Jr
Frank Fields
Robert Betts
Nancy Pawley
Susan Brown
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What Love Is
by Chelsea Armstrong (Age: 22)
copyright 11-01-2004


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
Love is what you make of it
Love is those stupid little things you bicker about
Love is hard work
Love is a Gift
Love is a Memory
Love is a hope that no one can destroy
Love is a that sudden feeling of sickness when you look into eachothers eyes

Love is what you make of it.
In time things will smoothe out.
I learned that the hard way.


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08-18-2008 Susan Brown    

True love is patient, as you've written here. Naturally, becoming stronger during the pursuit, to keep it alive. Short, yet right on point. Easy to make... my personal nod of approval, after reading this.
Thanks,
Susan
10-05-2007 Richard Reed Jr    

I can hear the voice of the narrator come through
loud and clear. The expression of the feelings was very well-done.
You used so few words -and said so much.

I liked this poem a lot.

Thank you,

~Rich
05-31-2005 Kat Kamiya    

it's really great. love is all of though things and more
12-20-2004 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

This is great. There are some type o's but I like it! Thanks, Anthony
10-07-2004 Lyle Berry    

Great beginning, Chelsea! My only criticism is the phrase "burning feeling deep with in your soul" which is good, but needs a little help. Expressions like "burning feeling" and "deep in your soul" are used so often in poetry that they don't have the power they once did, perhaps back when these were innovative expressions. To help with this, try some introspective searching (way down inside that expressive soul) and see if you can unleash some words that are totally you and say that line in a unique way - a way that makes the reader experience what you are feeling.

Warm Regards,
Lyle
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