Neptune
by
Lauren T.
(Age: 14)
copyright 07-17-2006
Age Rating: 7 to 127
Picture Credits:
Neptune
Listen to the sound of the sea
united by one sound or tune
The beautiful song that is lost in a memory
The beautiful song of the sea
The violin is the sound of it swelling
The piano that Acccopanies it is the crash
The song is so normal to the human ear
not to Mitchuru
Never to her
The Song that she plays is in her mind
the powers of water she will bind
The song is in her heart
and it is her part
The Senshi of the Sea
The song is so oridnary
To her its extraordinary
So the song is not heard by just anyone
Its hidden inside the heart of the one
The one that is at peace with the sea
She is the senshi of water
Michuru
The one who plays the song of the Sea
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There were a few spelling errors (I advise using the provided spellcheck) but it was beautifully written. In the manga, Haruka plays piano accompaniment to michiru's violin. Is that what the piano part is speaking of?
There is a minor error with the spelling of Michiru, but other than that the poem is great. You really showed her emotions in this piece, even with adding Haruka in it.
Nice job!
I really like Sailor Neptune and you wrote about her with such elegance; like a famous musician playing their final tune, this was completely astounding...I simply loved it!!