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Uranus -Redone-
by Lauren T. (Age: 14)
copyright 12-13-2007


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  Uranus -Redone-
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Haruka
She's strong and true
as
the wind on her wings
Sailor Uranus

Haruka
She's free
as
a bird
Sailor Uranus

Haruka
She's mysterous
as
the planet she protects
Sailor Uranus


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05-06-2008 Frank Fields    

Yup, all things considered (well mostly--who can consider all things? lol), the Sailors are generally not the easiest characters to write about. What you have done her is descriptive, but only up to a point. You whet our appetite for more, but at you hands, not by having to go look her up or anything like that. Still, what you've done is good. The presentation, the texture, the imagery and the portrayal of a character are all clear. Just needs to be a little bit longer. ^_~

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02-29-2008 Eric Gasparich    

Haruka is tough to pin down as a character. She's free, so you say, yet I think she is only as free as the ache in her heart allows. For that reason, I have a hard time seeing her as free when Michiru is not in the picture with her. And strangely enough, we are also given to believe that she has some sense of freedom when Sailor Moon is around her too.

As for the poem itself, it's good as far as it goes, but there needs to be more of it. Much more. Haruka has the depth for it.
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