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Creature of Light
by Toni Sweeney (Age: 21)
copyright 12-28-2004


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
What did I see?
I'm not so sure,
It may of been an angel,
but how would I know

It could of been the vampire,
the creature of the night
or the boogie man,
that lives under the bed at night

I believe it was neither,
because, it had feathered wings,
Wings of light and silver,and color
with a halo of gold

She had no cape,
she didn't try to scare,
She seemed to care

she was not there to hurt me
she was not there to scare me
she was there for what stood behind me

This was another creature
looked like that vampire
scary, creepy, and ugliest of all

With a twist of her hand
and a flick of light
she scared the creature away
without any freight


what can I say?
I believe what I saw
It was an Angel
that was sent from above




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08-10-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

An entertaining poem which flows along smoothly from beginning to end.
I liked this.

Rich


04-08-2006 Rafe B.    

been a year since I last logged in on this site and you've only gotten better while I've gotten only worse. I would like to believe we all have a guardian angel, but sometimes there's cause to wonder...


10-12-2005 Regina Pate    

I like the last stanza, it doesn't have to rhyme besides when it does and then it doesn't it grabs people's attention and then makes them think and then makes them wonder why you did that and then makes them read your poem over again and then and then and then, over and over, and then they might really see what you were saying and get what you were relaying and then their comment will actually mean something. see I just did it he he
Great write, good job, Thank you

I am going to have to read this again to find out why but I just had to say this now don't ask me why Good bye

Gina


07-27-2005 David Pekrul    

This is pretty cool. Yes, I believe in angels also, but I also believe they are sent from God; just shows how much He really cares for us.


04-25-2005 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

It could of been the vampire... should read
It could have been a vampire

Scary is not spelled scarry

Other than that, there were many descriptions to feed the imagination. Some believe angels, some in gaurdian angels, some in neither. Regardless, this was a sweet poem.


03-20-2005 Sarah Mahler    

Very nice. I like the decriptions you give of the two creatures. Nicely done.


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