No emotions whatsoever
by
Paula T.
(Age: 15)
copyright 10-20-2004
Age Rating: 10 to 127
I'm going through a really tough time right now, and I can't explain the way I feel through words so I wrote it in a poem.
It doesn't matter if you don't comment, I just want you to understand the way I feel.
No emotions whatsoever
A heart that's truly cold
No sympathy, no pain,
No emotions whatsoever
I don't care anymore
I just don't
You can't stop me
Stop trying
You can't stop
The way that I feel
It's up to me
And I don't care
I simply don't care anymore
You can't reach me
Because I'm in a world different from yours
And I couldn't care less
No feelings
No worries
In this empty world of mine
So don't try
To reach out
You will not suceed
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Every one says "Are you okay?" and you alaways say "I'm fine." But you never are okay. The lack of emotions I can relate no prolbem. I love the poem thoe. It is verry good. I see a door to the dark stuff. You should write mere about this kind of thing. I write poems and songs about the way I feel. It is a good way to figer out how your brain and heart go together. Good Luck.
Lovely job at expressing yur emotion, and I do hope that you are feeling better now. I love phrases you use... "I couldn't care less" "You will not succeed" etc.
A very good poem, don't worry the tough time will pass everyone feels like that once in a while....just hold your chin up high and remember who you are, and thats a talented person! keeps writing even if you feel no emotions right now, think about it you had to feel somethign to write what you just wrote... :) think about it. keep it up good work and feel better soon.
I'm sorry if you are truly feeling this way and I hope things will get better. That aside this is a good write, full of emotion and laid out very well. It may help to get these feelings out on paper. Cheer up, it will get better. Take care and Have fun. Steve
This is really a poem of the dark sides people face, and we usually do not see it, and some have never experienced it. It will come though, it is really depressing how this can happen, that is why I like this poem.
Ah yes, that blank stare as you witness the corrupt world fall deeper and deeper into the shadows. Further and further out of your grasp.
I understand completly. The feeling of not feeling is something i'm used to, sadly. Only recently has it started to leave. Things will get better Paula.
I Hope things get better for you Paula.
I don'y really know you but you seem like a wonderful person.
This is a great poem, I know exactly how you feel, even though it may be hard to belive, I do.
Terrific write, it's full of emotion, without really haveing it. Well Done!
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