I Hate You, I Hate You, I Swear To God I Hate You
by
Travis Bauer
(Age: 21)
copyright 10-26-2004
Age Rating: 13 to 127
I never really liked you
I don't see how she did
You were always treating me like crap
But I held on for my moms sake
You can beat me for all I care
You can treat me unfairly
But when it comes to my mom
You'd better be ready to face Hell!!!
I love my girlfriend
And I love my friends
But my love for my mother
Surpasses any love for anyone
She has been hurt so many times
Then you come along
And pick her up and pretend to love her
Then you drop an anvil through her heart
Like I said
I held out for as long as I could
But not anymore
That Hell you'll be facing is me!!!
No one has the right to hurt her damnit
I thought you had enough sense to know that
Guess I gave you too much credit
Thought you were smarter than that
I hope you understand me when I say
I hate you, I hate you, I swear to God I hate you
I mean it more than I can show
I'm too pissed off to back down anymore
I hope you rot in Hell
And face the plagues of Revelations
For all your stupidity and coldheartedness
Beg all you want, you'll never get my forgiveness
Did I tell you I hate you
Okay, just thought I'd remind you
Just don't forget it
I won't let you forget
What did she do to you
How could she do anything
Compared to the bullshit you pull
Tell me now!!!
I know she loved you enough
She stayed with you didn't she
Through all of your mental
And physical abuse
I know she's doing her part
With us kids, probably more than you
She raised us since we were little
And you hardly lifted a finger
It can't be money
She has a job
I know you are a money hungry bastard
But why treat her this way
Am I even close
Or am I just not seeing
Are you mentally retarded
Or are you just stupid
Even if you are mentally retarded
There is no excuse
I will never forgive you
For tearing her heart out
Just to let you know
I was trained to kill
And if I believed in killing
You would be my number one target
I will do no less
Than tear you apart
Piece by piece
And limb from limb
My mom deserves far better than you
If there is no better
Then screw the world
I won't let her be hurt again
As long as I live
I swear she will never hurt again
This promise I make not only to her
But to myself
Before we leave you
I just wanted to tell you something
Something I can't hold back
I hate you, I hate you, I swear to God I hate you
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Wow Travis,
That is all I can really say. I have been in your shoes one too many times. The love for a mother or someone as close can make us do crazy things. Take it from me I know. This was an emotional peice, and I hope to read some more of your works soon enough.
If you care too read some of mine...I am sure you will see the same in my words. *smiles*
Wow...very emotional! Love for your mother is a good thing, I love my mother too. Only... time and unforseen occurance is the culprit that has hurt my mother. I would do anything to have her back the way she was, and I feel your anger too. At least you have someone to direct it toward... I have no one except Satan to yell at... like he cares anyway. How I wish God's new world would come and make everything better for us all, you know? I sincerely hope things go better for both you and your mother.
I think every good mum needs someone like you travis, your love for your mum shows through this poem despite it being full of hate for another, well done and a really good write!
This is great, I don't know who this is aimed at but I have a pretty good idea. This is for all mothers to read. Especially the ones who have put up with bad relationships. Good Job
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