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I can definitely feel the anger and frustration; good choice of words and phrases. Reads well.
Couple of spelling errors:
The line "But your just to close! - should be "But you're just too close!"
The line "Pulsing viens" - should be spelled 'veins'.
This is a good poem. I can see and feel the anger in your poem. The words make great pictures. I have never quite figured out how to explain anger. You explain it nicely.