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Who Is She?
by Chelsea Armstrong (Age: 23)
copyright 11-09-2004


Age Rating: 13 to 127

  Who Is She?
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Who is she?
Where did she come from?
Does she have a name?
Or just one hell of an attitude?

She kind of looks like you
But with out the nasty frown
She has your eyes
But they are cold
She has your kiss
But it has a bitter taste
She has your stare
But it has this chilling feel
She has your smile
But it has a curious frown

She has your everything
But she is just not the same.

Who is she?
Does she have a name?
Where did she come from?
And why is she still here?

She is me
In every way
She is my darker side
On a very bad day

~* I think I am done, but I am not sure. I could use some thoughts on making it better or if it is alright the way it is Thanks guys and Ladies*~


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10-31-2007 Richard Reed Jr    

What a clever idea! It's totally complete in every way. It has just enough words and phrases, and says everything you need to say.

Technically, you have done your usual excellence of writing. Good line breaks = good rhythm.

Another great poem.
Keep it up,

~Rich
04-02-2007 Sarah B.    

Wow! I love this poem so much! I can relate to it when I'm having bad days. >_< I like how you made it personal and how it expresses yourself. GREAT WORK!! :)

Sarah B.
08-12-2005 Kat Voletto    

I don't see a thing wrong with this piece. It is wonderful and complete as is. ^_^ Keep it up, I look forward to reading more of your poetic works!
03-08-2005 Lucy Suzume Q.    

Wow! I LOVED this poem! It really expresses yourself!!!!!!!!!!! Good job!
12-20-2004 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Poetry is a work of the heart. What a poem says is what the author wants to portray. You have to decide if you have expressed the thought that you wanted to. Did you get across what you had in mind? If the answer is yes ,then you are done, but that doesnt mean that you won't want to write something else on the same subject later. This work is good and I hope to see more from you. I will be looking. Thanks, Anthony
11-11-2004 Anna Lemons    

Very good but leaves me wondering "why is she still here". Enjoyed this very much.
11-09-2004 SamiJo Mcquiston    

I really like the idea of this.
Describing a seperate part of yourself.
I think if you gave her a name, it would make it more personal.
Keep up the good work.
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