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It Took One
by SamiJo Mcquiston (Age: 20)
copyright 12-19-2004


Age Rating: 7 to 127

  It Took One
Picture Credits: http://www.dionsalvador.co.uk/ prints/

It took one person to say they didn’t love you
It took one day for you to find one who would
It took one minute to interrupt my world
It took one-hour to dismantle all the good
It took one month to move him in
It took one second to make me want to cry
It took one week for me to despise him
It took one you to make me say goodbye
It took one hatred to make me ill
It took one pain to make me want to stay
It took one life to make us go
It took one tear and I was driven far away
It took one blink to make me hate it here
It took one escape to make me want to change
It took one snap to fail at forgiveness
It took one step to make me feel different and strange
It took one look to give me new hope
It took one smile to make it feel right
It took one thought to start again
It took one ray to make my world bright


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05-24-2007 Cortney Jaruzel    

I really liked this alot. It flows nicely. I liked, "It took one month to move him in
It took one second to make me want to cry
It took one week for me to despise him
It took one you to make me say goodbye," a lot. Nice picture along with it. This really was a good piece. I like, I like. Nice job, SamiJo.



12-30-2004 Lyle Berry    

Wow SamiJo! Sometimes words are not enough to say how great some of your creations are. The repetitive theme here works "one-derfully" to coin a word. A little reminiscent of Three Dog Night's song One (is the Loneliest Number) which is another great lyric. This would make a terrific rock ballad.

Warm Regards,
Lyle
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