12-21-2010
Queency Delena
AAAWWWWWWWW!!...soooo touching!
i really really love it!
you should keep it up and make lots lots lots lots lots lots lots lots lots lots lots lots lots lots lots lots lots lots lots lots lots lots and lots!!!(*pant* *pant* hehe)
don't worry, I'll open my arms for ya!!
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08-16-2009
Frank Fields
We all do this, I think:
"Who will open her arms in the
evening breeze taking evil under
a saint’s smile see pretty color life"
Or should have. Or will. The jury's still out on that one. But those who've not, I think, have only lived a half a life. To savor her beauty in the name of any guise, does balance out the pan.
^_^
Frank :)
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08-15-2009
Lonnie Kornoely
wow such emotions and very deep feelings are in this it is such a great poem. Such a great use of words and how you inject such feelings you paint a great picture with the great use of words.
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01-05-2005
Delaney Lindley
I love this work. Very touching. Elegant and perfectly worded. My favorite line written line on here is "search for the candle light to the place of forgiven self" Sounds to me like you've almost found it.
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