Passed Me By
by
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
(Age: 47)
copyright 12-06-2004
Age Rating: 7 to 127
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To those who I have given,
my all,with every try.
I give this final smile,
and a well deserved,Goodbye!
To those who saw my weakness,
and used it to their gain.
I give a final wave,
for there I no longer remain.
And to those who started laughing,
at my plans,with a shrill.
They no longer think I'm funny,
my ambitions,they did not kill.
To all those lovely ladies,
who answered questions with a sigh.
That didn't even stop to check,
and calmly passed me by.
I'll make this final statement,
about times I wish not to tell.
Thank you for the lessons,
and then I'll say farewell!
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how appropriate, thanks Anthony I really did need to hear that again, you are so write, all the way even until the last stanza! Funny too. Hmm, push my nose up? Never, but push on through? Forever!
8:05 p.m. I will give you the time of day any time Anthony because I know you would do the same for me. Screw em, or whatever, It is there loss, I am glad you said goodbye, but where did you go -hello! lol Good job. Thank you
This is awesome. I can see that this must mean something to you and I don't know if that's the same as the message I got but it sounds to me like you are able to move on from problems. Cool write!
*Sly smile* My dear, I believe you and I must talk some how, your work is overwhelmingly amazing. I did not get the chance to read it before the corrections, but I find this too another splendid work that has managed to creep inside the silence of my mind.
Good, I like the rhymes you used, not so expected like many other writers. Their rhymes are tired and predictable. Good job keeping my attention too, by the way, you forgot the E in goodbye... well, goodby! LOL.
Thanks for fixing the spelling errors. It makes it easier for us to concentrate on the message instead of the mistakes. :-) So... I think I'll just give ya some more points! *grin*
Welcome !
