A Death in the Snow (True Story) by Mika L.

I looked up as I was outside playing, it was starting to snow. The next day the snow was soo deep. I put on my clothes, grabbed my sled, and rushed outside to play. It was colder than I expected.

I was on my was to Janes house to ask her out to play. We played for hours outside, had a snowball fight with this boy, made a fort that was just like a bed and igloo that we layed down on. Eventually we had to go home.

I then found out my friend Britney was at my house. We then went out to play but when I was walking, I saw what looked like a feather popping out of the snow.

We cleared the snow off to see what it was. I was scared, I felt like I was going to cry even if it wasn't mine. It was a dead bird lying on the stairs outside below the snow.

We named it Fluffy. I was a brown bird with white spots. I carefully picked the bird up off the stairs. I laid it down my favorite tree in the neighborhood. Me and Britney both grabbed some leaves and laid them around Fluffy.

We drew a sign saying not for anyone to step there. Since Britney was sleeping over, the next day, the first thing we did was to go see Fluffy.
We put on no winter jacket and it was still freezing
cold outside.

I was shocked. Fluffy wasn't there anymore. All we saw were feather scattered over the place and the leaves we laid there were gone. A cat probaly ate her. I cried. I was painful knowing she was gone.

Then on the hill, I saw Fluffy's body except it had no head or feet now. I stayed there still, kneeling down, I knew she got eaten by something. I couldn't bear to see anymore to do with Fluffy so I ran off, back inside the house.

Britney went with me. After a while I got over it but I knew I would remenber Fluffy forever......

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by Mika L. (Age: 15)
copyright 04-25-2005

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