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And I Think You Did Too
by Anthony Lane Stahlhut (Age: 48)
copyright 12-17-2004


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  And I Think You Did Too
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Do you know what total darkness sounds like?
Or how total silence looks?
Total darkness sounds like your gone,
and total silence is what my heart sees.

Sometimes when it rains, I feel sad.
I can remember how I have cried.
The rain like the tear drops were memories,
but they were memories of a happiness with you.

I'm alone sometimes now, but not completely.
It always seems like a memory of you,
is there encouraging me to go on, just as before.
And I know that I loved you,
and I think you did too!




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04-26-2006 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

I don't know if I like the first or the last lines the best out of the entire poem. YOu catch our attention quite effectively, and hold it beyond the borders of reading it. "I think you did too"... and so ends many memories. Sigh...
08-10-2005 Brian Dickenson    

Well Anthony you were not wrong. I can certainly empathise with this.
I also agree with Chelsea and David, as I think you know.
Well done
03-11-2005 James Shammas    

It took me a long time to read this. I do feel your anguish here. The strongest and most focal point of the poem is your comparison of tears to raindrops. Incidentally, the picture is heart renching too.
03-03-2005 Chelsea Armstrong    

Splendid...absolutly splendid! Anthony, I hope that your words are just that...words. You are never alone. For remember though I have never met you nor do I really know you, I am here with you alawys in your heart.
12-23-2004 Delaney Lindley    

I'm feeling pretty depressed at the moment. We all feel like this at the moment and I really relate to this and good picture choice.
12-22-2004 David Pekrul    

I agree with Nancy's comments. A great twist on two of our most basic senses.
12-18-2004 Emily Garwood    

aaaw this was a really nice poem and well described just a few mistakes:

2nd paragraph 3rd line teardrops should be two words

3rd paragraph 1st line compleatly should be completely
also on the 3rd line on,just you need a space in there...

perfect and another good poem by you...keep it up :)

Emy
12-17-2004 Nancy Pawley    

'Do you know what total darkness sounds like?
Or how total silence looks?'
These first two lines really caught my eye..good write, Anthony.
Nancy



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