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Never Forget Me
by Jane L. (Age: 14)
copyright 12-30-2004


Age Rating: 10 to 127

  Never Forget Me
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You left me to wander in the darkness,
Where the sun will no longer show her face.

Alone I am in the world to,
Wonder this land forever and more.

No longer will the roses bloom,
Nor will the cardinal sing.

Down my heart sinks.
To the bottom of the sea,
To the center of the earth.

On the surface I'm the happiest person on earth,
In the inside I'm first one to dissapear.

As I sigh,
Happiness vaperates,
Drop by drop.

What is the meaning of life?
Without you,
My legs are crippled,
My eyes are blind,
My ears are deaf.

My tears fall freely,
My eyes are full of loneliness.
My mind, always thinking of you.

Will you always remember me?

I will always remember you.
Never forget me...
Friend or more,
Whatever I may be to you.

My wish to you is to,
Never forget me.


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11-06-2006 Leigh G.    

My, my...expect a very unintelligent comment, for I'm stunned by this piece. The only thing I don't understand is how somebody could give this one point of praise. Really, I can't, no sarcasm here. This is a beautiful piece, that expresses things we all think of. I'd love to post a huge autobiography comment, but I'm stunned into silence. Beautiful piece, my only suggestion is add a few commas and capitalize each line. (My little dragonfly's training as really got me programed...) Wonderful and beautiful piece, I've thought of these things too, but it was always followed by a sigh and a scowl thinking to myself, "How in the hell dare you think of letting yourself fall to the level of love?" I also have a bad outlook on marriage...don't ask... Astonishingly beautiful work!

Your friend,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders...


02-11-2005 SamiJo Mcquiston    

I think everyone wants to be memorable but I think most memories fade with time. You'll always remember your true love and everyone else will melt away, like the snow in the spring.
Keep up the good work!


01-05-2005 Travis Bauer    

This is very good...I think you are leading the contest in my oppinion... Keep writin'.
Travis


01-01-2005 Delaney Lindley    

LoL, Love it! WOW!


01-01-2005 Delaney Lindley    

LOOOOOOOOOOVE it!!!!


01-01-2005 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Hello there. You know, sadness comes to us in many forms. And although I have not been through exactly what you have in the same way you have (or maybe I have... who knows?)... I know I know sadness, I know grief has often encompassed me. Still, determination (and some say stubborness) has made me stand tall when all the weight of the world was upon my shoulders. And when I felt my knees buckle and thought I couldn't stand for a moment more, prayer and God gave me the strength needed to endure. Pain? Sadness? Fear? Longing? ... Ah, yes, I know them all very well. *Hugs* And I hope you find your strength to endure and go on and refuse to let the world keep you from finding every bit of happiness that's out there for you and that you surely deserve. :-)


01-01-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

This is very good. You have expressed yourself very well. Thank You, Anthony



12-30-2004 Tina Z.    

Dear Jane L.
WOW! This is a very powerful poem. I mean it is really really good! It is so full of emotion, of sadness, it makes you think that you are actually expiriencing it. I mean with all the examples and the wording, too. the wording is really good! This poem is really good!


12-30-2004 Jane L.    

I'm really surprised. This poem is longer than I expected it to be. Usually all my poems are really short. Anyways no matter how hard you try (unless you've been though the same exact thing) you will never understand my life from the outside. Though this poem I'm expressing my sadness to you. Hope you like it.


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